Thursday, October 01, 2009

My inspiration comes home: Winter in Maine


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So hot sunny August quickly went by, followed just as fast by September. No, almost. Something happened this year, something rarely seen. Something that threw a plot right in my lap, complete with characters. You see, I'm a farmer in a tourist town on the North Atlantic coast. That means winter comes fast, and summer is fleeting, our growing season is short, barely a 100 days long even in our best years, and when tourists hit the beach, they hit it all at once on one of the few days that we get each year without snow.

We start planting in May (providing the snow has melted that soon) and we hope we can get everything harvested before mid October when the first blizzard season of the winter starts. (Our "big" blizzards of February, make our much smaller four foot blizzards of October look like a dusting.) Our town has a strange meteorological phenomena caused by the extreme cold winds that blow in off the Gulf of Maine and get trapped in Saco Bay. While the rest of the Southern Maine's growing region is listed by the weather services as zone 5, here in Old Orchard Beach, we have a zone 4 growing season most years, and a zone 3 season in the colder years. Our summers rarely reach 70F and our winters commonly dip to -20F. Wind chill factors bring our temps to -40F from December to February. It's like somebody cut a piece out of Alaska and dropped in next door to Portland just to be funny. (Yes, mini icebergs have formed on the shores of Old Orchard Beach - it's rare, but it has happened.) Why we get this extreme cold while the rest of Maine does not, has been explained by weather men as having something to do with the way Saco Bay is shaped. It's shaped like a horseshoe with a very small opening, which let's the wind in off the ocean, but than traps it there holding the cold air in, all year long.

Farmland and Hoar Frost, Fruitlands, near Alexandra, Central Otago, South Island, New Zealand


This year, has been abnormal, even for us. In 2009 our growing season started late - it was the first week of June by the time the ground had thawed enough to plant - a result of heavy rains the fall of 2008, getting frozen deep in the ground just before a blizzard than hit us in mid October that same week. By May 2008 we still had snow well over a foot tall covering most of our garden plot. This was highly unusual, because by May first we usually have the ground tilled and planted. Our growing season lost a whole month this year.

Usually when we have a late spring, we also have a late winter, so our growing season stays about the same. That is what we expected. Therefor, in August when I started planning my NaNoNovel, I did not plan on an early winter to take us by surprise. Second week of September 2009, after a night of Tweeting about my circus ideas, we awoke to find an alarmingly early frost had snuck in during the night and decimated our crops nearly 4 full weeks before harvest time!

Hoar Frost and Road by Butchers Dam, near Alexandra, Central Otago, South Island, New Zealand


To make things worse, the early cold, drove fish deep into the sea to escape the cold blasts on top of the ocean - meaning not only did farmers lose their crops, but fisherman lost their hauls as well.

To go one step farther - in mid-September our tourist season is not yet over. Palace Playland (the beach side amusement park) is still open and running, ice cream and pizza shops are still open, bikini clad tourists are still shopping, - the early cold front chased all the tourists out of Maine, forcing the rides and shops to shut down early.

As is normal for winter in Old Orchard, shops are boarded and shuttered, buildings are empty and the few of us that stay in this cold icy town year round, are once again living in a ghost town - a full two months earlier than normal!

And while normally I would complain at this early arrival of winter killing crops, chasing away tourist income, and driving me indoors to flee the harsh cold ocean winds - this could not have happened at a more perfect time! I had my creepy circus to write about, but no reason to write about them, no reason for them to be creepy, and more importantly, I had no characters to write about. November is fast coming upon us and I still had no clear idea what I wanted to write - and than this happens, and suddenly, riding in on an ocean breeze, everything makes perfect sense to me now - the story, the plot, where the circus came from, why they are here, what they want, and more importantly - who my main character is whom is leading my creepy circus onward: Jack Frost.

Hoar Frost on Willow Tree, near Omakau, Central Otago, South Island, New Zealand


Of course, weird way our seasons are, this freak frost only lasted 2 days and than our weather went back to normal for this time of year. It came just long enough to kill crops, ruin fishing, and chase away tourists, leaving our town a ghost town. Oh well. In any case, it lasted long enough to give me a plot idea.


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What Genre Is My Vampire Story?
Where Do You Get Your Ideas?
Improving your writing with what you read.
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Some thoughts on Submitting MSS ---


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Okay, so while I'm waiting for the NaNoWriMo site relaunch and taken a break from NaNoNovel plot outlining, I've been zipping around the net reading posts from various blogs for writers (a common habit for me, though you don't often hear me mentioning that I do it.) I don't often comment on blogs, and it's even less common for me to link back to a post and write my own post about the other one, but today I was reading NATHAN BRANSFORD - LITERARY AGENT blog and found THIS POST quite interesting, enough to require me to comment AND post about it.

The post talks about previously published authors, who due to recent publisher shutdowns, are now seeking agents to represent them to new publishing houses. As many of my readers know, I don't use an agent, so don't myself seek them out, but I do however read their blogs and websites because they give some of the best advice out there.

One part of his post, stood out to me, and I'll quote that section here:

I want to hear from previously published authors.

But these queries often take this form:

Dear Agent,

I published this book, it got these reviews, etc. etc. etc.

I teach here, I have a blurb by this person, etc. etc. etc.

I am a professional writer, I am back in the game, looking for new representation, etc. etc. etc.

Did I mention my previous book that was most definitely published? Here's more about it etc. etc. etc.

And oh by the way I have a new project.

Sincerely,
Previously Published Author

Do people actually say things like that? Well, yes, I know they do. Back when I had opened The Twighlight Manor Press to public submissions I got a lot of letters exactly like that. =/ Weird. It doesn't matter how often I see it or how often I hear others mention it, the fact that people send out letters like this, always amazes me.

WOW! When I'm submitting, I don't ever mention past books or even that I'm published before! I focus on the book at hand, looking for future contracts, not books past and fluffing them.

Besides, I publish with so many different pen names it wouldn't do me any good to point out "Hey, I published this book" because you'd look at it and go "Huh? But someone else's name is on it." :)

Of course the commenter's on this post had many varying things to say about this, but I agree with commenter @Margaret-Yang *Publication DOESN'T guarantee a free pass. And yes, you still need ANOTHER good book and compelling hook to interest an agent.* That's what I say too. That's why I don't focus on my past books, just on whatever the book I'm working on here and now.

Well, I suppose you could call this a mini rant. Whatever. I just think writers would do much better if they could learn a bit of letter writing etiquette.



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Editing and Drafts
Create a Fantasy Realm
Advice For NaNoWriters!
Creating Character Profiles
Are You A Renegade A Writer?
How To Become a Better Writer
The Top 5 Tools For NaNoWriMo
What Genre Is My Vampire Story?
Where Do You Get Your Ideas?
Improving your writing with what you read.
Have You Written Your Author's Interview Yet?
How I Reached 50,000 in 30 Days and You Can Too!
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On Writing Harlequin Style Romance: Writing To Publish


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On Writing Harlequin Style Romance: Writing To Publish

It seems that everywhere I turn, there is one more person saying they are doing NaNo to the tune of quantity over quality. Well, I say you don't have to sacrifice quality to get quanitity. I know a lot of us who are writing romance this year are writing with the goal to publish. That thought in mind, I thought is would be nice if we had some advice straight from to top to help inspire us onward.

I remember last year, lots of threads asking about Harlequin's lines, mostly wanting to know what Harlequin was looking for so they could tailor their plot to fit. So, this year I thought I'd write a post with all the links to all the answers.

So, here are some links to Harlequin's articles for writers. I found them usuful in writing my own stories, will be referancig them for this years NaNoWriMo, and thought I'd pass the info on to you to help inspire you while writing your novel.

The writing guideline links detail what each line/series is looking for, and these links I found very, very helpful for reading prior to plotting/outlining/writing because it gives me ideas what the publisher is currectly and activly looking for, thus helping me to tailor my plot to what the editors are seeking.

Of course some of these links (such as the polishing/submitting links) won't apply until after November when we get around to editing, but still, I found the advice very helpful and hope you do to:



What is emotional conflict?


What Turns Your Reader Off? Mistakes that Harliquin editors see too many romance authors doing in their writing.


The Harlequin American Romance Editors' top ten dos and don'ts for writing contemporary series romance books.


Great Beginnings, Great Expectations…


Make Time to Write


Where Do You Get Your Ideas?


You don’t have to win the competition to get published.


Are You Ready To NaNo?! Yes! You read that right. Harlequin activily promotes NaNoWriMo! Not only that, but they encourage NaNoers to send their romance novel mss to Harlequin after NaNoWriMo ends! Harlequin has published multiple NaNoNovels in the past. (Hopeful mine and yours will be among the ones that gets published next year! I can't wait for November to ge here.)


Plotting for Pleasure


The Alpha Hero: Home Is Where His Heart Is


Mistresses


The Presents Personality Indicator


The Hero Checklist You MUST read this if you are designing male characters specifically to match one of Harlequin's lines.


Key to Writing: the Characters!


What Makes a Great Love Scene


What is Romance?


Tips on Writing for the International Market


Is Your Muse Commitment-Phobic?


Presents—The Beginning Advice on how to start your story off with a bang, that'll keep editors and readers reading past page one.


basic rules for revising and editing (You won't need this article until after NaNoWriMo.)


Don’t Let the Plot Get in the Way of the Story This is one on my favorite articles in this series of articles for romance writers looking to publish with Harlequin. I think this may be the single most important article any romance writer could read.


Rules for Making Your Own World. Important, important, important - things like making sure your character can remember the names of her sisters from from chapter to the next.


Three Act Structure.


Structure in a Flash For anyone writing short storys. Doesn't really apply to NaNoWriMo, but does offer some good advice no matter how long your story is.


Too Bad To Be Good? Advice for those who's MMC turns out to be more villain than hero (I have this problem myself - all my girls always fall for the bad guy instead of the hero!)


Editors' Pet Peeves Things authors do that drive editors crazy.


From Slush to Shelf


Two-Chambered Heart Good article to help you decide if you want to write a stand alone book or write a whole series around the same world/characters/theme.


Recipe for Success: Know Your Series


Learning to Rewrite Every writer should learn the importance of rewiting. (Just remember not to start rewriting until AFTER November 30th, though!You won't need this article until after NaNoWriMo.)


Making a Minefield


Writing Dirty


Mission: Submission


Polish Until It Shines This is a great article! Make sure you read it BEFORE you try submitting anything to any publisher - it applies to every novel romance or otherwise. Great advice! (You won't need this article until after NaNoWriMo though.)


Writing Guidelines Frequently Asked Editorial Questions


Writing Guidelines Harlequin American Romance


Writing Guidelines Harlequin Romance


Writing Guidelines Harlequin Superromance


Writing Guidelines Steeple Hill Love Inspired This is Harlequin's clean "sex-free" line.


Writing Guidelines Steeple Hill Love Inspired Historical


Terms that cannot be used in a Steeple Hill novel OMG! You have got to read this list! Did you know that the words "fiend" and "golly" are considered swear words that can't be used in Harliquin's Christian Romance series!!! Wow - even if you don't plan to write a *Christian Romance* you got to read this list just to see what common every day words are "banned" from being used in these! (I didn't even know Harliqun HAD a Christian line until I read this one!)


Writing Guidelines Short Works: Briefs and Bites


Writing Guidelines Harlequin Historical Undone


Writing Guidelines Nocturne Bites


Writing Guidelines HQN Books


Writing Guidelines Harlequin Historica


Writing Guidelines Harlequin Intrigue


Writing Guidelines Spice Briefs This is the erotica line for those that have sex on every page from page one.


Writing Guidelines Harlequin Teenagented submissions only

Writing Guidelines LUNA. Harlequin does fantasy? OMG! YES! Dragons, princesses, and wizards galore! I may find myself writing something dragony just so I can be a part of this! LOL!


Writing Guidelines MIRAagented submissions only


Organizing Your Writing


Do-It-Yourself Editing


Sample Query Letter


From Slush to Published


Get Out and Stay Out…of the Slush Pile


Sample Query Letter


Sample Synopsis


Sample Manuscript Page


Proof Marks





Well, there you have them. So, is anyone writing their NaNoNovel with the hopes of getting it published via Harlequin? I am, though I'm not sure yet which line my story will fit into. I write "clean romance" which would fit nicely into the Steeple Hill line, but my characters are supernatural beings - Mermen, Phookas, Fallen Angels, Far-Daggins, and of course Vampires and their like. My characters belong in the Nocturne line, but they are not so quick to leap in bed as the Noturne line seems to require. I need a paranormal version of Steeple Hill without the religiouss overtones! Is anyone else writing clean paranomal? Which line you think my story belongs in?

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Editing and Drafts
Create a Fantasy Realm
Advice For NaNoWriters!
Creating Character Profiles
Are You A Renegade A Writer?
How To Become a Better Writer
The Top 5 Tools For NaNoWriMo
What Genre Is My Vampire Story?
Where Do You Get Your Ideas?
Improving your writing with what you read.
Have You Written Your Author's Interview Yet?
How I Reached 50,000 in 30 Days and You Can Too!
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trying to remove disquis from my blog - seems I need to post to see if it leaves

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okay disquis is gone on future posts but for some reason it stays on the older posts - oh well - i any case, the Google comment boxes work better so now they are back

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What's your take on this? I'd love to hear what you have to say about this post. Leave a comment and share your views!


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Editing and Drafts
Create a Fantasy Realm
Advice For NaNoWriters!
Creating Character Profiles
Are You A Renegade A Writer?
How To Become a Better Writer
The Top 5 Tools For NaNoWriMo
What Genre Is My Vampire Story?
Where Do You Get Your Ideas?
Improving your writing with what you read.
Have You Written Your Author's Interview Yet?
How I Reached 50,000 in 30 Days and You Can Too!
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NaNoWriMo Relaunch Today!


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The NaNoWriMo relaunch is just hours away - about 2 hours give or take a time zone. The 2009 NaNo forums should be live this evening or early tomorrow morning! YAY! I can't wait. Clean forums - no threads- nice empty white pages just waiting to be written on. It won't last long though - The first week of October is the time when thousands of posts start flying in faster than ever. Love it, love it, love it!

I'll be there, posting with every one else. If you need a writing buddy, your welcome to add me to your list. Here's my NaNo Buddy Page. Hopefully it'll still be there after the relaunch (unlike NaNo 2005 when they lost the archives along with most of the member accounts and I had to start a new account - thankfully I was able to get the same user name as I originally had!)

This year I'm planning 2 books, one horror (which I've got outlined already) and one romance which I have no plot for yet, except that I will be writing it with the intention of sending it to Harlequin after it's finished. :) I'm planning on 75k for each (150k by the end of Nov.).

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What's your take on this? I'd love to hear what you have to say about this post. Leave a comment and share your views!


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Editing and Drafts
Create a Fantasy Realm
Advice For NaNoWriters!
Creating Character Profiles
Are You A Renegade A Writer?
How To Become a Better Writer
The Top 5 Tools For NaNoWriMo
What Genre Is My Vampire Story?
Where Do You Get Your Ideas?
Improving your writing with what you read.
Have You Written Your Author's Interview Yet?
How I Reached 50,000 in 30 Days and You Can Too!
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